Honestly, I don`t have a hobby but I like have it. My reasons because I don`t have one are in relation when the fact that I don`t have time because I have a lot of activities in the university, not only study, but this activity I don`t consider like a hobby because I do that for reason that are so important.
In relation with my favorite hobby that I like to do, I ever think in basketball because when I went to the school I practiced that and I was so good. I started with this sport when I was 7 years old.
When I practiced this I went to school two morning between Monday and Friday, and Saturday. I remember that my teacher was to old as a grandfather, and he was to tall, like a tree, his name was Pedro. He was a good player in his young time. And he taught me a lot of think about basketball, in special discipline that you need. Apparently I forgot that, because i don`t play basketball now , but I don`t think that because I use discipline in the other activities that I do.
I like basketball because is a sport that teach you play in group, you never can play basketball alone, ever in the court are important. And now I really like to start again to play basketball.
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I think that football is better than basketball, but if I couldn´t practice football I will preffer basketball than other sports.
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You say, "the reason why" not "my reason because". You use "because" in an answer. And the sentence " but this activity I don`t consider like a hobby because I do that for reason that are so important," should be: "I don´t consider this activity as a hobby because I do it for an important reason".
And not "I ever think", but "I ALWAYS think".
Also, not "when I practiced this", but "when I practiced this activity".
To compare two things of the same category you say, "my teacher was as old as a grandfather" and "he was as tall as a tree"
Do you mean, "he taught me a lot of THINGS?"
Finally, DON´T FORGET TO USE A SUBJECT AFTER A CONNECTOR. say, "I like basketball because IT is a sport that teach you play in a group."
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